Brilliant!...what a wonderful blessing,
Intelligence in a presence that can teach charisma all a lesson;
The brilliance of affection,
Skills to hide the most vivid signs of stressing;
A world without a struggle is a world without a hustle,
And its brilliant in it's hustle of life's embarrassment rebuttal;
A rest without a cuddle is like a game without a huddle,
With irrelevant strategies like a gang not involved in trouble;
Beauty got a castle for all of its presenters,
Fighting for the same intentions while making its way towards the center;
A memory of beauty is always something to remember,
But a shield of no hope is such a powerful defender;
Beautiful yearns all the fires that been burn,
But its not about what we was giving taking away from what we earn;
A direction to success always has its bumps and turns,
But the only ones who find the right path is the ones who use what they learn;
A turn on by others appearance,
Some say they look towards those most resilient;
Just motions upon motions if we feel it,
I don't know their thoughts but Beauty is Brilliant!
Wow George, I love this! So many of the lines in this poem/rap really resonate with me, I'm going to have to write them down (and credit you, of course!). I think my favorites are "A memory of beauty is always something to remember," and "A direction to success always has its bumps and turns,
ReplyDeleteBut the only ones who find the right path is the ones who use what they learn." Those are some really beautiful lines. The first one is like a reminder to not take the beautiful things in life for granted, not to just forget about the wonderful moments you've had. The second one I mentioned is really cool because it's saying that even though times can be tough, we still have to step it up and work hard to live a fulfilling life.
I feel like I have a lot to learn from you. The world has a lot to learn from you, because not only do you have important things to say, but you say them in such a beautiful and smooth way that makes me want to read more. Thank you for sharing such profound thoughts!